Add your own life poem

[susie11]

Music, tears, pain
The three mix
Like emotion
Raw, exposed, hurt
Vulnerable and confused
Yet making sense in words

Loneliness as a black cloud
Surrounds my world
Like darkness
Closing in and chilling
Oppressive, cold
Never leaving my side

Insides churn
Wearing me down
Like hard work
Leaves no silence
Constant noise and voices
Turmoil and pain

Time, a gift I’m told
Yet too much
Like eternity
Means craziness, insanity
Creeps close
Testing, checking, wearing

Words, just empty
Nothingness in them
Like vast expanse
No meaning, no feeling
Aching for compassion
Yet just alone

[shadyfish]

nice work susie

[Admin]

Yes very good, thankyou for sharing

[chritler]

First I was afraid
I was petrified
Kept thinking I could never live
without you by my side
But I spent so many nights
thinking how you did me wrong
I grew strong
I learned how to carry on
and so you're back
from outer space
I just walked in to find you here
with that sad look upon your face
I should have changed my stupid lock
I should have made you leave your key
If I had known for just one second
you'd be back to bother me

Go on now go walk out the door
just turn around now
'cause you're not welcome anymore
weren't you the one who tried to hurt me with goodbye
you think I'd crumble
you think I'd lay down and die
Oh no, not I
I will survive
as long as i know how to love
I know I will stay alive
I've got all my life to live
I've got all my love to give
and I'll survive
I will survive

It took all the strength I had
not to fall apart
kept trying hard to mend
the pieces of my broken heart
and I spent oh so many nights
just feeling sorry for myself
I used to cry
Now I hold my head up high
and you see me
somebody new
I'm not that chained up little person
still in love with you
and so you felt like dropping in
and just expect me to be free
now I'm saving all my loving
for someone who's loving me

It's about surviving.

[shadyfish]

yes I remember the song well

[chritler]

yes I remember the song well

That's not much of a poem.  Good effort though.

[carsyboy]

A flower buds and then it dies,
No longer seeing the deep blue skies.

No more does it feel the heat of the sun,
A drink of rain is gone there is none.

Then one day the flower is dead,
Laid to rest on its soily bed.

[harryphilandryan]

i watch his show everyday
pretend were rolling in the hay
i love his eyes, there bright and blue
i want to be held close to you

his hands are soft and silky smooth
his legs are long when on the move
I like his face, its nice and tight
i want him to love me through the night

When im home, and all alone
switch off the tv unplug the phone
our love will grow like new wild plants
i watch your show when in my pants

[Forgotten Mother]

R.E.U.N.I.T.E.D.

Relinquishment, the hardest thing to do for any woman,
Her baby lost to adoption, never to be hers again,
Sadness, pain, torn to pieces, two lives that need repairing,
The future is bleak for the mother who's lost her child.

Enduring onwards, the pain to be beaten down,
Despair and heartache always there, hidden by a smile,
Pretending the world is rosy and moving forever on,
The hard exterior hiding so many cracks beneath.

Undying love for the lost child keeps her going on,
The years go by and the memory never, ever fades,
Work occupies her mind during the day, partying at night,
Life has to go on , the act never broken as she is strong.

Nothing really changes inside with birthdays as a reminder,
Men come and go in her life as she will not commit,
Too frightened to get close, too frightened to be pregnant,
Fears of pressure and lies that cannot be fought again.

Intense pain eventually buried so deep inside her soul,
Needing to be loved before she is too old for love,
A young man, younger then her, determined to win her,
She accepts his love, frightened to end her life alone.

Trust in another begins to grow though not completely,
She needs another despite being guarded and keeps control,
They marry and travel through their life together cautiously,
The years go by with her still hurting but not alone.

Eventually her dream comes true for closure at last,
To find her son simply by chance, not prepared,
Her heart acts then her head takes over in complete fear,
The fear dispels, the response from her son positive.

Dreams do come true for those good of heart and faith,
Today I couldn't be happier even if I tried any harder,
My Lord took me on a journey I couldn't begin to understand,
Yet now I do knowing my precious son is alive.